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美国GRE写作技巧 如何写得更有渲染力
发布时间：2017-04-08
GRE写作也是一道难题，由于与美国学生同台竞争，自然在作文上难以比得上人家。GRE作为美国的研究生入学考试，也有一定难度，在英语水平上比本科SAT考试要难，不过也不必太过担忧，下面Essay9英国论文代写平台介绍一下美国的GRE写作技巧，在一些句子使用上的技巧以及GRE写作如何安排时间。
一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。
1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如：
Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab. Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)
2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如：
1) Weak: The team members are good players.Revision: The team members play well.
2) Weak: One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.Revision: One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.
3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中，把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如：
1) Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion.Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists.
2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered.Revision: The books you ordered have arrived.
二、多用语意具体的动词，保持句意简洁明了。例如：
1、Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.
2、Poor: She is a careful shopper.Better: She compares prices and quality.
三、尽量运用主动语态。例如：
1、Weak: The organization has been supported by charity.Better: Charity has supported the organization.
2、Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate.Better: Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.
四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语。例如：
1、Wordy: My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.Improved: My little sister prefers chocolate milk.
2、Wordy: We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.Improved: We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.
3、Redundant: We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.Improved: We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
4、Redundant: My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.Improved: My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.
五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。例如：
1、Weak: They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.Improved: They will not agree to any of his proposals.
2、Weak: I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.Improved: I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.
GRE写作时间安排
留学生普遍在GRE写作板块得分比较低。而GRE写作最为单独计分的环节，如果考生能够取得四分的成绩，那么也就等于考生跨入了申校的安全线内。所以GRE写作保底四分，如何才能万无一失呢?
想要保底四分，考生就需要拥有自己的写作模板，市面上的各种模板百花齐放，所以考生可以根据其中精华的句子，进行拼接。模板不用准备太多，只要适用范围广就可以。
拥有自己的模板之后，考生就可以要学会合理的分配自己的考试时间。GRE写作分为两个板块，所以每一个板块考生有30分钟的答题时间。所以考生可以将这些时间分为三个时间短：1. 首先考生可以使用12-15分钟，写出完整的第一段和三个正文段的topic sentence，以及完整的末段。考生在进行第一段创作的同时就要构思topic sentence,末段无非是重复结论和三句topic。这样的好处是作文结构框架已经搭好完整，这样做的话，考生至少保证3分已经到手。2.然后利用13-10分钟，填充完三段正文。其实考生想要保底4分，最有效的方法就是将每一段的topic sentence的意思表达清楚。3. 最后考生要保留5分钟时间用来检查，检查一些拼写以及语法错误。或者是留下剩余的5分钟在考生没有完成的时候作为缓冲。
写作需要自己深耕，如何进行深耕呢?需要自己多练习，勤能补缺是良训，对于GRE写作来说，要做到保全分数，就需要达到四分的成绩，但还是有点难为情，因此，Essay9英国论文代写平台建议留学生，应当早作准备，如果准备出国深造了，就应当从大二甚至大一就开始准备，时间不待人，不要临时赶考呀。
更多写作技巧和留学文书代写需求，可以关注Essay9海外文书平台 也可以和我们24小时在线客服QQ:546780交流哦。-X
一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。
1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如：
Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab. Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)
2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如：
1) Weak: The team members are good players.Revision: The team members play well.
2) Weak: One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.Revision: One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.
3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中，把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如：
1) Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion.Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists.
2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered.Revision: The books you ordered have arrived.
二、多用语意具体的动词，保持句意简洁明了。例如：
1、Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.
2、Poor: She is a careful shopper.Better: She compares prices and quality.
三、尽量运用主动语态。例如：
1、Weak: The organization has been supported by charity.Better: Charity has supported the organization.
2、Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate.Better: Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.
四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语。例如：
1、Wordy: My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.Improved: My little sister prefers chocolate milk.
2、Wordy: We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.Improved: We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.
3、Redundant: We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.Improved: We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
4、Redundant: My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.Improved: My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.
五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。例如：
1、Weak: They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.Improved: They will not agree to any of his proposals.
2、Weak: I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.Improved: I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.
GRE写作时间安排
留学生普遍在GRE写作板块得分比较低。而GRE写作最为单独计分的环节，如果考生能够取得四分的成绩，那么也就等于考生跨入了申校的安全线内。所以GRE写作保底四分，如何才能万无一失呢?
想要保底四分，考生就需要拥有自己的写作模板，市面上的各种模板百花齐放，所以考生可以根据其中精华的句子，进行拼接。模板不用准备太多，只要适用范围广就可以。
拥有自己的模板之后，考生就可以要学会合理的分配自己的考试时间。GRE写作分为两个板块，所以每一个板块考生有30分钟的答题时间。所以考生可以将这些时间分为三个时间短：1. 首先考生可以使用12-15分钟，写出完整的第一段和三个正文段的topic sentence，以及完整的末段。考生在进行第一段创作的同时就要构思topic sentence,末段无非是重复结论和三句topic。这样的好处是作文结构框架已经搭好完整，这样做的话，考生至少保证3分已经到手。2.然后利用13-10分钟，填充完三段正文。其实考生想要保底4分，最有效的方法就是将每一段的topic sentence的意思表达清楚。3. 最后考生要保留5分钟时间用来检查，检查一些拼写以及语法错误。或者是留下剩余的5分钟在考生没有完成的时候作为缓冲。
写作需要自己深耕，如何进行深耕呢?需要自己多练习，勤能补缺是良训，对于GRE写作来说，要做到保全分数，就需要达到四分的成绩，但还是有点难为情，因此，Essay9英国论文代写平台建议留学生，应当早作准备，如果准备出国深造了，就应当从大二甚至大一就开始准备，时间不待人，不要临时赶考呀。
更多写作技巧和留学文书代写需求，可以关注Essay9海外文书平台 也可以和我们24小时在线客服QQ:546780交流哦。-X
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